I would recommend getting cleaner and more accurate lines.
Instead of just free handing, (Just moving your hand in a direction) try and sketch the picture first by lightly/using a lighter color of black and keep sketching a curve is a certain spot until it either looks straight or curved, just do that for the whole picture then retrace.
Not bad though, the shading is kind of impressive.
This looks sick!
For a 15 minute doodle, this seems pretty solid and high quality.
Was NOT expecting Kirby in this.
I loved it at first, but now?
It's even better!
He dropped that mic like a fucking boss.
That attacking animation is so clean!
Glad I'm not the only one who remembers this game.
Your a really underrated artist.
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